English
Exercise 20

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Revise the following sentences by eliminating wordiness.  Strive to be clear, concise, direct, and precise in your vocabulary.

 

Question 1:

 

There are three reasons that explain the sudden sales drop for our product.

 

There are three reasons that explain the sudden sales drop for our product.

 

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Question 2:

 

For each and every single customer who complains, there are 10 to 15 other ones out there who are not bothering to speak up about their dissatisfaction or unhappiness.

 

For each and every single customer who complains, there are 10 to 15 other ones out there who are not bothering to speak up about their dissatisfaction or unhappiness.

 

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Question 3:

 

At this point in time in the program, I wish to extend my grateful thanks to all the support staff who helped make this occasion possible.

 

At this point in time in the program, I wish to extend my grateful thanks to all the support staff who helped make this occasion possible.

 

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